Craft a core message that cuts through commodity noise
When I first set out to explain my marketing consulting, I wrote page after page of features—SEO audits, blog strategies, campaign planning—and it felt flat. Prospects nodded politely but rarely called back. Then, at a small networking event, someone asked, “So what’s your deal?” I stammered, and that question stung. Driving home that night, I asked myself, “Why would I choose me if I were them?”
The next morning I called five of my earliest clients. I asked four questions: Why did they call me? What did I deliver nobody else could? How did they describe me to a friend? And what did they hope I’d never forget? The answers were surprising: “You make marketing easy,” “You cut through the confusion,” “My team actually uses your ideas.” I realized they didn’t care about my process—they craved clarity and action.
That afternoon I threw out the old brochure, grabbed a flip chart, and wrote: “We help overwhelmed small business owners simplify marketing so it actually works.” It felt so good I almost laughed. ‘Simplify marketing’ was exactly the promise I needed. Everything changed: my website headline, my speaking intro, even my email signature.
Sales meetings stopped feeling awkward. Prospects leaned forward and said, “Really? How do you simplify it?” I’d show them client case studies and checklists—no fluff. The talking logo and core message became the hinge for every touchpoint, and my closing rate climbed from under 10% to over 35% in months.
Share your new core message whenever someone asks what you do. You’ll find yourself pausing before you pitch, eager to see the reaction. Then offer a quick example or checklist that delivers on your promise—people lean in, ready to learn more. Keep repeating the message until it’s as natural as breathing, and watch how it transforms your conversations and referrals.
What You'll Achieve
You will shift from blending into commodity equivalence (mindset shift) to standing out with a memorable, benefit-driven message that opens doors and shortens sales cycles (external result).
Articulate your unique business difference
Interview ten happy clients
Call or meet ten of your most enthusiastic clients. Ask them why they chose you, what stood out, and what competitors couldn’t match. Record their exact words to capture genuine positioning.
Draft a talking logo
Sum up what you do in one sentence focused on benefit and target—‘We help accountants slash tax headaches in under 60 minutes.’ It should force the question, ‘How do you do that?’
Write your purpose statement
On a whiteboard, finish the sentence ‘We exist to…’ in business terms—no marketing fluff. Keep refining until it rings true for every team member and guides every decision.
Reflection Questions
- What exact words do clients use when they rave about you?
- What convenient writing prompt helps your team remember your purpose statement?
- How often do you lead your pitch with features instead of benefits?
- Where does your current positioning leave prospects confused?
- How will you test your new talking logo this week?
Personalization Tips
- A pastry chef asks dozens of patrons why they return, learning that the midnight pickup option beats every bakery in convenience.
- An IT consultant summarizes: ‘We keep office networks alive overnight when you’re unplugged,’ prompting curiosity from CFOs.
- A dentist finds patients rave about in-chair massage—her talking logo becomes, ‘We eliminate dental dread with a spa touch.’
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